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Knights of Andreas 3.07: Which Battles to Fight

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My favorite chapter so far. Your dialogue is really coming along, and Harden has to be the funniest fucker I've ever read about. Maverick's growing up, and the defense is turning into something great.

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:ooo:

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Yea, this chapter was packed with a lot of great action, and dialogue, too, as Bware pointed out. The part with the jerseys in the locker room was awesome.

 

Mav and Everett on the same page? :ooo:

 

Look out, NFL.

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Epic playoff run incoming. Cool to see not everyone gets along and fights happen on teams. Seems like while Zack and Randall aren't friends by any means, they got it out of their systems. Everette and Mav are getting on the same page, we're healthy. Time to start kicking ass. :yep:

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Ya'll should have let Adam Javad party with you...

 

Good chapter Steven.

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Zack got him in the jaw and also got the takedown. Zack wins, suck it Churreh.

I loved the line from Harden to Mav about apologizing or he'd always be the hot-shot QB. Awesome that, though Mav may have been right, Coach stays grounded and sees the big picture. Going to be sweet seeing Mav tear shit up and ascend to greatness, now that he's not as much of a cunt.

 

Dmac saying “You guys are tripping. These are dope.” made me laugh out loud. Spot on, lmao.

 

Stevo I'll send you $20 via Paypal if you post the next chapter tomorrow. :D

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Zack got him in the jaw and also got the takedown. Zack wins, suck it Churreh.

 

I loved the line from Harden to Mav about apologizing or he'd always be the hot-shot QB. Awesome that, though Mav may have been right, Coach stays grounded and sees the big picture. Going to be sweet seeing Mav tear shit up and ascend to greatness, now that he's not as much of a cunt.

 

Dmac saying You guys are tripping. These are dope. made me laugh out loud. Spot on, lmao.

 

Stevo I'll send you $20 via Paypal if you post the next chapter tomorrow. :D

Pls. Randall came away okay. Grantzing got bloody nose. Also outmuscled Grantzing clearly.

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Pls. Randall came away okay. Grantzing got bloody nose. Also outmuscled Grantzing clearly.

 

A nose is a weak, fickle thing. It didn't say how he got it, it could've been something as simple as rolling on the ground during the scuffle. Briggs came away okay? How'd he get that "nasty gash"? Oh, that's right, Zack punked his ass and took him down after landing a shot to the jaw. Briggs's claim to fame is bear hugging Grantz' and picking him up or the "outmuscling" you referenced. Fucking pro.

 

And all this because Zack cared about the team and wanted to see people like Damian improve while Randall cares only for the C on his chest, which means nothing considering he stands around and pouts like a bitch while Zack makes an effort to motivate and help the team. :yao:

 

 

Grantzinger >>>> Randall

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Of the banned word parade.

 

(I really miss that word.)

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Hey Stevo, make sure Randall goes at it again if Grantzinger doesn't be a man and let the parking lot fight be the end of it. :smug:

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I want to see Briggs and Zack take it to the main stage and fight on field. Reactions would be amazing.

 

Loved the offensive players conversation after Mav went full diva in practice.

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I want to see Briggs and Zack take it to the main stage and fight on field. Reactions would be amazing.

 

Loved the offensive players conversation after Mav went full diva in practice.

Briggs would never do that. Wouldn't risk a suspension. :nope:

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Brock would have mopped Randall and Grantzinger like a fucking boss. lol

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And Martin would have told you to save it for the other team of assholes.

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Brock would have mopped Randall and Grantzinger like a fucking boss. lol

 

Shut the fuck up, Brock is a stupid pussy that cares only about money/himself.

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Stevo I'll send you $20 via Paypal if you post the next chapter tomorrow. :D

 

 

Psh. Only a Jackson? Gonna cost more than that. (Actually it's not even finished yet. Editing takes forever.)

 

 

Thanks for all the praise this week, fellas. Any chapter with a fight between teammates and a QB cursing out his OC should be fun, and I had a blast writing this one.

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OK, OK, I have a new favorite chapter again.

 

:D

 

Next up, Romo and I are going head to head on Turkey Day.

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Pass me the ball. That is all

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