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Knights of Andreas 4.09: Our Own Destiny

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They can't stop you! Also Malik is gonna poison Flash with mushrooms, the fiend!

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Chance staying, Mav returning, Knights rolling. :ooo:

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“Well?” Maverick asks.

 

The trainer looks at the quarterback, the coaches, then back to the quarterback.

 

“You’re ready.”

 

 

 

I got goosebumps when I read this. Let's fucking go!!!

 

Slight grammatical error, Steven.

 

"The Ravens and Steelers are both 8-5, so whoever loses the West won’t necessary necessarily be granted a wild card."

 

Great chapter. Resigning our GM, Mav is back, we're ready to roll!

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More damn typos.

 

BWARE WHAT AM I PAYING YOU FOR???

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Ervry time I've mentioned a typo, you say "I'll hit those when I go through the major edit," so I assumed they were of no importance :p

 

Another great chapter, my friend. You're going to be a published writer, at some point, and I think you'll look back on KoA as the greatest tool of growth that helped you along the way.

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Bware's contributions thus far have mostly been on maximizing character development and consistency of the story, in which he has been an enormous help.

 

Also, bump. :Banana:

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