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Knights of Andreas 6.01: Fault Line

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Wow, Steven. If this is chapter one, I can't wait to see what happens next. All that planning you put into this final journey has paid off already. Honestly couldn't believe what I was reading at first. I thought several players were having an Inception-like dream about the earthquake. The way you wrote their reactions during the quake was amazing.

 

I'm going to read this again later to see if I was biased or not, but I think this is already one of my favorite chapters ever.

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Richter scale! Oh!

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Oh no the word filter strikes again.

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I've a suggestion to keep you all occupied.

 

Learn to swim.

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The whole earthquake scenario allows for a lot of interesting sub plots. Good shit, looking forward to the next chapter. Knights should cut Brock though because he's pretty much an overpaid bum lol.

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Awesome work Stevo. As Sarge said, might be my favorite chapter overall here.

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I loved how you delved right in and told the offseason through game 1. Happy to see Flash still on board. Enjoyed the couple scenes with Zack and Brock. The organic food thing was a nice touch. :p

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